I agree. This person dug IVI out from MC's head. That's invasive asf. And I'm surprised that Nash and Leanna ( I chose to tell her) didn't kick up more of a fuss after finding out that Rohan cut into MC's head. I'm honestly bewildered...
Thank you so much for making this! It's amazing so far and gets better and better with each update. My husband loves this story too! ^_^ I wanted to let you know that we've mentioned it in our list of recommended Twine stories. But if that's not okay just let me know. You can view it here, let us know if there are any other details we should add for your title --> https://itch.io/t/1763600/twine-games-with-character-customization-part-1
Have to say a scene in Chapter 3 at the secondary comms (avoiding spoilers) was done very well. I saw elsewhere that was an option, and I knew I'd feel as uncomfortable as I do with it. You did a fantastic job of making it feel real, with that choice with that character. I didn't at all expect it would truly be an option (at least not so seemingly early in the story), and while I will still always choose it, it makes me very uncomfortable as I'm sure was fully intentional. So, again, great job with that. I'm not quite uncertain of my choice but I recognize the morality of it very well and I don't like being made aware >:(.
I feel like the romance options are a bit unforgiving to straight people, the only obvious choice being Rohan, and I can see why some wouldn't want to do that. Still, that doesn't change that the story is fascinating, and your writting is amazing... kept me on mi toes from start to finish. This right here is the gud stuff. Thank you.
When I finished the third chapter my shoulders were so tense. I was really felling the story, and not just this chapter the previous ones too. Every interaction make me feel something, it's really amazing!
Loving this very much, can't wait for wait it's next :D
Love it so far. In love with Nash and Rohan... leaning a bit more towards Nash at the moment though... And Joia is my baby already and I would die for that sweet little angel~ <3
Rohan gets off, for assault mind you, way way to easily for me personally but that's my only snag with this. other than that i guess this is an okay story
NGL, kinda really interested in the 'want to kill you but also want to fuck you again' dynamic with Rohan's path. I love complex/complicated/unconventional/messy/WTF 'romance' paths so dang much. Totally here for it, and many moar sexy times! :D Rohan and MC are currently my favorite characters, and Nash ain't half bad either! Also, Joia is a total cutie.
BTW, I did notice one mistake/bug (pun unintended). When you have the choice to 'go left' or 'go right' when you leave the medbay, if you choose left and visit the cockpit, the big bug guy (sorry, forget his/their name) identifies as a 'he' ('since he understands he has to choose', or whatever), and then when you go to the lounge right after that, the exact same 'since I have to choose' conversation occurs and bug guy mentions that he/they identifies as a 'they'. Just figured I'd mention. Looking forward to more.
So, I've been playing this game over and over for the last month, so it's safe to say I'm digging it. Project Hadea has inspired some strong creative desire within me but I can't draw worth a damn and it's probably a bit early for fic, so here's a playlist I made for my operative, hope that counts. Their (code)name is Napir and their pronouns are all of them since I plan on having a play-through for every RO (Nash is OTP tho) ♥
lmaoo I'm glad you like him! he is a romantic option for male MCs, but he takes some time to warm up to you so there aren't any romantic interactions yet
Wow! At some point I started walking through my room I was so angry I couldn't sit still now I desperately wanna kill Rohan hopefully I'll get the chance 😶 your writing is so detailed it's as if I'm right there seeing everything. Seriously bro great work.
Your writing is so immersive! It really takes the time to let the reader glimpse into the characters' emotions. Really interested in seeing how the Rohan stuff plays out
Perfect, Perfect , Perfect!! I'm already in love with everyone and Nash is my baby . I love that I just adopted a kid outta no where too lol Joia will be protected
Love the story and the writing, but it bothered me that in the latest chapter, we can't ask the obvious question; What did Rohan do to IVI? It doesn't make sense that MC's not even thinking about it.
hey! yeah, I realise this chapter had less interaction w rohan than people were expecting - essentially, because of the amount of time it was taking me to write and how big it was getting, I split chapter two into halves to release separately, and since a lot of the rohan-interaction was weighted towards the second half, most of that is still upcoming in what is now chapter three. hope this eases some of that concern!
I enjoyed this alot. I'm in love with Nash RN. Also just a question, can we actually kill Rohan somewhere down the line? Just for science of course... hehe... :))
Maybe I'm just being dumb but I can't seem to get passed the first page of the prologue on my mac...it's most definitely me but help since this seems like such a good game
Edit (like 13 minutes later): I think I just had to zoom out a bit cause it was working fine on my windows parition
hi! yeah, if you're using Safari and an IOS it seems to have some problems - I'm working on fixing it but haven't got to it yet. If you continue to have problems, I recommend trying a different browser for now.
Just finished the fantastic first chapter. Good mix of action, world-building, and character development/interaction. A pleasure to read from start to finish.
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it is pretty darn aggravating how literally everyone around looks at the MC like they're in the wrong here...
(looks like some Rohan's simps disagree...)
I agree. This person dug IVI out from MC's head. That's invasive asf. And I'm surprised that Nash and Leanna ( I chose to tell her) didn't kick up more of a fuss after finding out that Rohan cut into MC's head. I'm honestly bewildered...
Thank you so much for making this! It's amazing so far and gets better and better with each update. My husband loves this story too! ^_^ I wanted to let you know that we've mentioned it in our list of recommended Twine stories. But if that's not okay just let me know. You can view it here, let us know if there are any other details we should add for your title --> https://itch.io/t/1763600/twine-games-with-character-customization-part-1
Have to say a scene in Chapter 3 at the secondary comms (avoiding spoilers) was done very well. I saw elsewhere that was an option, and I knew I'd feel as uncomfortable as I do with it. You did a fantastic job of making it feel real, with that choice with that character. I didn't at all expect it would truly be an option (at least not so seemingly early in the story), and while I will still always choose it, it makes me very uncomfortable as I'm sure was fully intentional. So, again, great job with that. I'm not quite uncertain of my choice but I recognize the morality of it very well
and I don't like being made aware >:(.I feel like the romance options are a bit unforgiving to straight people, the only obvious choice being Rohan, and I can see why some wouldn't want to do that. Still, that doesn't change that the story is fascinating, and your writting is amazing... kept me on mi toes from start to finish. This right here is the gud stuff. Thank you.
When I finished the third chapter my shoulders were so tense. I was really felling the story, and not just this chapter the previous ones too. Every interaction make me feel something, it's really amazing!
Loving this very much, can't wait for wait it's next :D
Love it so far.
In love with Nash and Rohan... leaning a bit more towards Nash at the moment though... And Joia is my baby already and I would die for that sweet little angel~ <3
I had fun time reading this and hope get back IVI from that dick
Rohan gets off, for assault mind you, way way to easily for me personally but that's my only snag with this. other than that i guess this is an okay story
I cannot comprehend how people unironically are totally fine with her. It's baffling.
NGL, kinda really interested in the 'want to kill you but also want to fuck you again' dynamic with Rohan's path. I love complex/complicated/unconventional/messy/WTF 'romance' paths so dang much. Totally here for it, and many moar sexy times! :D
Rohan and MC are currently my favorite characters, and Nash ain't half bad either! Also, Joia is a total cutie.
BTW, I did notice one mistake/bug (pun unintended). When you have the choice to 'go left' or 'go right' when you leave the medbay, if you choose left and visit the cockpit, the big bug guy (sorry, forget his/their name) identifies as a 'he' ('since he understands he has to choose', or whatever), and then when you go to the lounge right after that, the exact same 'since I have to choose' conversation occurs and bug guy mentions that he/they identifies as a 'they'.
Just figured I'd mention. Looking forward to more.
thank you! Rhaxa does use both he & they pronouns, but that conversation shouldn't be cropping up twice, I'll fix that!
So, I've been playing this game over and over for the last month, so it's safe to say I'm digging it. Project Hadea has inspired some strong creative desire within me but I can't draw worth a damn and it's probably a bit early for fic, so here's a playlist I made for my operative, hope that counts. Their (code)name is Napir and their pronouns are all of them since I plan on having a play-through for every RO (Nash is OTP tho) ♥
ohoho thank you!! I love it - and I'm so flattered it inspired you <33
I got a crush on Ki-Ha, just to realize that there's no romantic option
lmaoo I'm glad you like him! he is a romantic option for male MCs, but he takes some time to warm up to you so there aren't any romantic interactions yet
Phew, the description says it's 1 male RO, so I wasn't sure
For male MC's only..
...crying, drowning, dying😭
A W for us male players
Wow! At some point I started walking through my room I was so angry I couldn't sit still now I desperately wanna kill Rohan hopefully I'll get the chance 😶 your writing is so detailed it's as if I'm right there seeing everything. Seriously bro great work.
The futuristic setting and the writing really pleases the cyberpunk fan in me.
Now don't get it twisted.
I hate children but I WILL commit warcrimes for Joia.
Also I saw that Akira reference.
Last thing, I dunno what Rohan did but they can catch those General audiences-hands
Your writing is so immersive! It really takes the time to let the reader glimpse into the characters' emotions. Really interested in seeing how the Rohan stuff plays out
Perfect, Perfect , Perfect!! I'm already in love with everyone and Nash is my baby . I love that I just adopted a kid outta no where too lol Joia will be protected
Love the story and the writing, but it bothered me that in the latest chapter, we can't ask the obvious question; What did Rohan do to IVI? It doesn't make sense that MC's not even thinking about it.
hey! yeah, I realise this chapter had less interaction w rohan than people were expecting - essentially, because of the amount of time it was taking me to write and how big it was getting, I split chapter two into halves to release separately, and since a lot of the rohan-interaction was weighted towards the second half, most of that is still upcoming in what is now chapter three. hope this eases some of that concern!
I enjoyed this alot. I'm in love with Nash RN. Also just a question, can we actually kill Rohan somewhere down the line? Just for science of course... hehe... :))
oho,, Nash my beloved,, I owe you my life for chapter 2 lol. I am holding Joia gently
YESS IM WAITING FOR CHAPTER 2 AND IT'S DEFINITELY WORTH IT!!
Awesome!
Chapter 2 was fun! I'll look forward to getting to know everyone better!
AAAAAAA it's so good!! I hope we will get more of it! (Btw I love Nash so much sjsjdisj)
The first chapter was amaaazing. Can't wait to play more.
Played chapter 2 and i'm so pumped for chapter 3 <3
Yep, this is officially now one of my top favorites. Thank you so much for making it, I love it! I really do hope you continue it.
Well then, that was amazing!
But now the cliff hanger's gonna kill me!
Can't wait for more!!!
Awesome!!! O_O
This had me at the edge of my seat from start to finish! All the characters so far are so interesting!! I look forward to reading more in the future.
I'm gonna kill Rowan :D
hi, I'm really glad you enjoyed it! I appreciate your comment hehe, though I'd prefer to keep this a spoiler-free zone if at all possible? tysm❤❤
I am in love, this is probably one of the best IF i have played thus far! I can't wait for the next chapter!
omg i love this and oh baby joia smoll baby I'm gonna pamper you. cant wait for the next chapter!
...Fuck Rohan.
but also... Fuck Rohan ;)
I'm not into lying and abuse/assault, thanks.
Maybe I'm just being dumb but I can't seem to get passed the first page of the prologue on my mac...it's most definitely me but help since this seems like such a good game
Edit (like 13 minutes later): I think I just had to zoom out a bit cause it was working fine on my windows parition
hi! yeah, if you're using Safari and an IOS it seems to have some problems - I'm working on fixing it but haven't got to it yet. If you continue to have problems, I recommend trying a different browser for now.
Glad you got it working!
okay im interested. I can't wait for more
Love it so far! I'm really enjoying MC and Nash's whole dynamic.
Just went through, I liked it a lot!
Just finished the fantastic first chapter. Good mix of action, world-building, and character development/interaction. A pleasure to read from start to finish.
I like whats been released so far~