Love the story and the writing, but it bothered me that in the latest chapter, we can't ask the obvious question; What did Rohan do to IVI? It doesn't make sense that MC's not even thinking about it.
hey! yeah, I realise this chapter had less interaction w rohan than people were expecting - essentially, because of the amount of time it was taking me to write and how big it was getting, I split chapter two into halves to release separately, and since a lot of the rohan-interaction was weighted towards the second half, most of that is still upcoming in what is now chapter three. hope this eases some of that concern!
I enjoyed this alot. I'm in love with Nash RN. Also just a question, can we actually kill Rohan somewhere down the line? Just for science of course... hehe... :))
Maybe I'm just being dumb but I can't seem to get passed the first page of the prologue on my mac...it's most definitely me but help since this seems like such a good game
Edit (like 13 minutes later): I think I just had to zoom out a bit cause it was working fine on my windows parition
hi! yeah, if you're using Safari and an IOS it seems to have some problems - I'm working on fixing it but haven't got to it yet. If you continue to have problems, I recommend trying a different browser for now.
Just finished the fantastic first chapter. Good mix of action, world-building, and character development/interaction. A pleasure to read from start to finish.
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Love the story and the writing, but it bothered me that in the latest chapter, we can't ask the obvious question; What did Rohan do to IVI? It doesn't make sense that MC's not even thinking about it.
hey! yeah, I realise this chapter had less interaction w rohan than people were expecting - essentially, because of the amount of time it was taking me to write and how big it was getting, I split chapter two into halves to release separately, and since a lot of the rohan-interaction was weighted towards the second half, most of that is still upcoming in what is now chapter three. hope this eases some of that concern!
I enjoyed this alot. I'm in love with Nash RN. Also just a question, can we actually kill Rohan somewhere down the line? Just for science of course... hehe... :))
oho,, Nash my beloved,, I owe you my life for chapter 2 lol. I am holding Joia gently
YESS IM WAITING FOR CHAPTER 2 AND IT'S DEFINITELY WORTH IT!!
Awesome!
Chapter 2 was fun! I'll look forward to getting to know everyone better!
AAAAAAA it's so good!! I hope we will get more of it! (Btw I love Nash so much sjsjdisj)
The first chapter was amaaazing. Can't wait to play more.
Played chapter 2 and i'm so pumped for chapter 3 <3
Yep, this is officially now one of my top favorites. Thank you so much for making it, I love it! I really do hope you continue it.
Well then, that was amazing!
But now the cliff hanger's gonna kill me!
Can't wait for more!!!
Awesome!!! O_O
This had me at the edge of my seat from start to finish! All the characters so far are so interesting!! I look forward to reading more in the future.
I'm gonna kill Rowan :D
hi, I'm really glad you enjoyed it! I appreciate your comment hehe, though I'd prefer to keep this a spoiler-free zone if at all possible? tysm❤❤
I am in love, this is probably one of the best IF i have played thus far! I can't wait for the next chapter!
omg i love this and oh baby joia smoll baby I'm gonna pamper you. cant wait for the next chapter!
...Fuck Rohan.
but also... Fuck Rohan ;)
I'm not into lying and abuse/assault, thanks.
Maybe I'm just being dumb but I can't seem to get passed the first page of the prologue on my mac...it's most definitely me but help since this seems like such a good game
Edit (like 13 minutes later): I think I just had to zoom out a bit cause it was working fine on my windows parition
hi! yeah, if you're using Safari and an IOS it seems to have some problems - I'm working on fixing it but haven't got to it yet. If you continue to have problems, I recommend trying a different browser for now.
Glad you got it working!
okay im interested. I can't wait for more
Love it so far! I'm really enjoying MC and Nash's whole dynamic.
Just went through, I liked it a lot!
Just finished the fantastic first chapter. Good mix of action, world-building, and character development/interaction. A pleasure to read from start to finish.
I like whats been released so far~