Perfect, Perfect , Perfect!! I'm already in love with everyone and Nash is my baby . I love that I just adopted a kid outta no where too lol Joia will be protected
Love the story and the writing, but it bothered me that in the latest chapter, we can't ask the obvious question; What did Rohan do to IVI? It doesn't make sense that MC's not even thinking about it.
hey! yeah, I realise this chapter had less interaction w rohan than people were expecting - essentially, because of the amount of time it was taking me to write and how big it was getting, I split chapter two into halves to release separately, and since a lot of the rohan-interaction was weighted towards the second half, most of that is still upcoming in what is now chapter three. hope this eases some of that concern!
I enjoyed this alot. I'm in love with Nash RN. Also just a question, can we actually kill Rohan somewhere down the line? Just for science of course... hehe... :))
Maybe I'm just being dumb but I can't seem to get passed the first page of the prologue on my mac...it's most definitely me but help since this seems like such a good game
Edit (like 13 minutes later): I think I just had to zoom out a bit cause it was working fine on my windows parition
hi! yeah, if you're using Safari and an IOS it seems to have some problems - I'm working on fixing it but haven't got to it yet. If you continue to have problems, I recommend trying a different browser for now.
Just finished the fantastic first chapter. Good mix of action, world-building, and character development/interaction. A pleasure to read from start to finish.
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Perfect, Perfect , Perfect!! I'm already in love with everyone and Nash is my baby . I love that I just adopted a kid outta no where too lol Joia will be protected
Love the story and the writing, but it bothered me that in the latest chapter, we can't ask the obvious question; What did Rohan do to IVI? It doesn't make sense that MC's not even thinking about it.
hey! yeah, I realise this chapter had less interaction w rohan than people were expecting - essentially, because of the amount of time it was taking me to write and how big it was getting, I split chapter two into halves to release separately, and since a lot of the rohan-interaction was weighted towards the second half, most of that is still upcoming in what is now chapter three. hope this eases some of that concern!
I enjoyed this alot. I'm in love with Nash RN. Also just a question, can we actually kill Rohan somewhere down the line? Just for science of course... hehe... :))
oho,, Nash my beloved,, I owe you my life for chapter 2 lol. I am holding Joia gently
YESS IM WAITING FOR CHAPTER 2 AND IT'S DEFINITELY WORTH IT!!
Awesome!
Chapter 2 was fun! I'll look forward to getting to know everyone better!
AAAAAAA it's so good!! I hope we will get more of it! (Btw I love Nash so much sjsjdisj)
The first chapter was amaaazing. Can't wait to play more.
Played chapter 2 and i'm so pumped for chapter 3 <3
Yep, this is officially now one of my top favorites. Thank you so much for making it, I love it! I really do hope you continue it.
Well then, that was amazing!
But now the cliff hanger's gonna kill me!
Can't wait for more!!!
Awesome!!! O_O
This had me at the edge of my seat from start to finish! All the characters so far are so interesting!! I look forward to reading more in the future.
I'm gonna kill Rowan :D
hi, I'm really glad you enjoyed it! I appreciate your comment hehe, though I'd prefer to keep this a spoiler-free zone if at all possible? tysm❤❤
I am in love, this is probably one of the best IF i have played thus far! I can't wait for the next chapter!
omg i love this and oh baby joia smoll baby I'm gonna pamper you. cant wait for the next chapter!
...Fuck Rohan.
but also... Fuck Rohan ;)
I'm not into lying and abuse/assault, thanks.
Maybe I'm just being dumb but I can't seem to get passed the first page of the prologue on my mac...it's most definitely me but help since this seems like such a good game
Edit (like 13 minutes later): I think I just had to zoom out a bit cause it was working fine on my windows parition
hi! yeah, if you're using Safari and an IOS it seems to have some problems - I'm working on fixing it but haven't got to it yet. If you continue to have problems, I recommend trying a different browser for now.
Glad you got it working!
okay im interested. I can't wait for more
Love it so far! I'm really enjoying MC and Nash's whole dynamic.
Just went through, I liked it a lot!
Just finished the fantastic first chapter. Good mix of action, world-building, and character development/interaction. A pleasure to read from start to finish.
I like whats been released so far~